RhymesWith0range's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[From the Sky]

We'll get 'em next time...

Suggestion: Try not to make your movies so random/bad.

During most of the movie, I didn't even know what was going on...was there even a point to this movie? It wasn’t scary, it wasn't funny, it had no action, there was no drama...it was pointless! Plus, the sound didn't even go with the story.

Next time, make sure you think your storyboard over. Create characters, an introduction, a plot, etc.

*And especially don’t get lazy and scribble black over the each scene.

But overall...yeah, it sucked. [ No effort ]

ShadowVengance responds:

I'll work on the story more, as everyone said that was my major flaw. I wouldn't say no effort, it could have been better, but I did try, if you didn't like it, i'll try better next time. Thanks for taking the time to review.

[Time to get serious]

Finally, a movie with Ketchup...

...wow...

...the sad thing is I laughed at the end.

(I'd like to see a sequel)

[F.U.]

ELEVEN MINUTES!

Truthfully, I didn't watch the whole thing. I stopped about three minutes in; eleven minutes is too much for me to only get a few laughs. Honestly, It looked like one of those random movies with no plot, just endless amounts of jokes that aren't always funny. My suggestion to you is next time, make sure your introduction grabs the viewers attention.

Since I didn't watch the whole movie, and I've read a lot of positive reviews...I'm just going to give you all fives.

(It's late; I'm tired)

rockymike responds:

I guess that's kinda fair. If you can, watch the whole thing. There's a great ass joke in there you gotta see.

[Crow(Sono Kutsuu)Trailer]

Yeah, I'd watch it...

Looks interesting...but build off of that idea. Make sure you put more detail into the plot; a crow that brings dead people back to life? Lastly, don't get lazy with the animation and turn the movie into a pile crap.

-Good work.

Boxkitten responds:

I promise not to let you down, i'm going to work on this a bit, and try to make it work. i understaind what you say about the lazyness.

i'm not going to get lazy about this, i'd be killing something i like very much.

[H0PE]

...

That was horrible! Truthfully, it was the most random shit I've ever seen in my life. It would have been better if you probably showed some flashbacks or something about his present life or the reason why he cuts himself. In my opinion, it was much more entertaining than depressing; but since the sound fit the movie, the kid never gave up, and the animation wasn't too bad, overall, I'll save you from getting a bad rating. Good work, but next time maybe try to make a movie when your in a good mood. (Hope you never feel sad again.)

-Peace

speddyfeddy1234 responds:

Cool, thanks for the friendly review. Look out for my upcoming series Pissed Off Grizzly Bears... I make that at my best