RhymesWith0range's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[From the Sky]

We'll get 'em next time...

Suggestion: Try not to make your movies so random/bad.

During most of the movie, I didn't even know what was going on...was there even a point to this movie? It wasn’t scary, it wasn't funny, it had no action, there was no drama...it was pointless! Plus, the sound didn't even go with the story.

Next time, make sure you think your storyboard over. Create characters, an introduction, a plot, etc.

*And especially don’t get lazy and scribble black over the each scene.

But overall...yeah, it sucked. [ No effort ]

ShadowVengance responds:

I'll work on the story more, as everyone said that was my major flaw. I wouldn't say no effort, it could have been better, but I did try, if you didn't like it, i'll try better next time. Thanks for taking the time to review.

[Time to get serious]

Finally, a movie with Ketchup...

...wow...

...the sad thing is I laughed at the end.

(I'd like to see a sequel)

[Crow(Sono Kutsuu)Trailer]

Yeah, I'd watch it...

Looks interesting...but build off of that idea. Make sure you put more detail into the plot; a crow that brings dead people back to life? Lastly, don't get lazy with the animation and turn the movie into a pile crap.

-Good work.

Boxkitten responds:

I promise not to let you down, i'm going to work on this a bit, and try to make it work. i understaind what you say about the lazyness.

i'm not going to get lazy about this, i'd be killing something i like very much.